Thursday, August 30, 2007

Miles from nowhere


Miles, can walk along the
line,
even if he’s drunk as hell.

The line is a mental map
which he can scratch and tell.

He’s a listless, hopeless wanderer
Does that ring a bell?

Did you think I couldn’t rhyme?
Well, you’re thinking real swell.

3 comments:

rajesh said...

My first time too...i wonder if u wrote this one ? its not that one plagiarizes, its when one tries to hide...
rajesh
p.s i like wht i see, u seem to be building a following

Coo said...

Thank you! and yes this one was unfortunately original.

chitgo said...

terribly short is my only complaint....