Friday, March 28, 2008

Of scabs and you

The bumpiness of it surprised the tips of my fingers
How like an annoying sibling it had stationed itself over my once open wound
Black and coagulated. Like my memory of you
I've always liked to pick on them. Let the sharpest edge of my talon do the honours
Sometimes I see raw pink. My freshly severed heart.
Most times a watery blood. The most impure love.

9 comments:

Pinochyo said...

And this on a day when I walk into a wall with my forhead, cut it like a lil apple and has a huge scab around it, where i tore off the hospital plaster?Unbllloooodddyccaannyy!!

From the eulogy to pain you've created, we take it that the 2 exes n the one-offs aint doin you too much good?

Anonymous said...

your blog writing ive always maintained was just about ok by me. but your poetry.. its something else babe...

PS- i hope you've gotten rid of that 'scab' by now...

chitgo said...

ouch. and yet..so real.
i like that you say what I don't want said.
whasup coolio?

Anonymous said...

i hope you've dumped all the arseholes.. you can do so much better my love!

Coo said...

@pinochyo - what is this child? full karmic konnections and all.

@anon 1 and 2- hmm im still wondering which 2 women you are. i will call and find out.

@chitgo- what ra, abusing windows vista and all. im in delhi may 4th onwards. we will catch u properly this time yes?

Wlah said...

Caa...when we meetingggggg...

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chitgo said...

you f!@#ing better call me. don't act cooler then you are. lets you, me and debs get together. should be a scene.

Anonymous said...

blog is interesting though the blogger wants to be percieved as above-it-all cool so badly, it is somewhat embarassing. You are one lonely girl, and I don't mean only in the sense of being in between lovers. Perhaps, that was too harsh of me. Yet, and yet, such cynicism at the age of 25 makes it perfectly clear why no one is willing to stick around with you. Hell, just reading your blog makes me feel so indifferent about life, its a miracle that you have made it so far...lol.

All that said, reading your blog is weirdly compelling. Kinda like watching the Hindenburg blimp slowly burning up but in slo-mo (some of your "industry's" lingo)